Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Do government should focus on solving immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future? I strongly concede with speaker former assertion that on trying to solve the major that will occurs in the future, the government should mainly focused on the problems that occurs initially at first so that the chief problems won't occur in the future.
The fundamental reason why I agree with assertion is that due to development of science and technology, various epic problems are increasing at an alarming rate at the present time. Such problems are mainly related to the environmental degradation and pollution. For instance, with the development of sophisticated automobiles, people are highly fascinating upon it so that the air pollution is increasing rapidly. If early attention to such problems are not provided, then several chronic problems may become augmented in this future which will may create threat to the entire human civilization. Therefore, government should imposed various severe laws related to the environmental conservation so that numerous fortuitous problems mayn't happen in the future.
Another reason for my agreement with the speaker is that
due to the increment of earth temperature, various mountain glaciers are melted rapidly each day. So, if such problems increases rapidly, then one day all the snow covered mountain will vanished from our mother earth. Thus, such problems should considered at first so that numerous epic threat may not happen in the future. Moreover, in society each day numerous accidents are also increasing in an alarming rate due to congested road maintenance. Hence, different incentives should be taken and considered so as to minimize various problems in the future.
Some may argue that only considering minor problems of the present as the major one, then various major problems that is going to happen in the future will be neglected. As a result, such major problems may create immense threat to the entire human race. For instance, the problems related to oceanic water cycle if gets escalated due to human negligence, then it is sure that such disruption on cycle may create chronic problems to the rainfall. As a result, it will not take even a second to convert the green pastures into deserts. Thus, it is responsibility of human society to minimize such threat by improving the environmental condition. However, this point flawed since if the people when become civilized and careful regarding the environmental conservation then such problems will never happen in the future. Hence, the action that we deed at present will decide our destiny in the future.
All in all, if the above factors are contemplated we can easily reach a conclusion that government should strictly formulates various laws at present so that different epic problems will not surely occur in the future. Thus, in spite of anticipating problems of the future, different governing bodies should be actively participated to solve the immediate problems of the today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'focus'
Suggestion: focus
...he future, the government should mainly focused on the problems that occurs initially a...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...my agreement with the speaker is that due to the increment of earth temperature, ...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are melted rapidly each day. So, if such problems increases rapidly, then one day...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'vanish'
Suggestion: vanish
... day all the snow covered mountain will vanished from our mother earth. Thus, such probl...
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Line 7, column 509, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...centives should be taken and considered so as to minimize various problems in the future...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...ious problems in the future. Some may argue that only considering minor problems of...
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Line 9, column 740, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come civilized and careful regarding the environmental conservation then such pro...
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Line 11, column 116, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'formulate'
Suggestion: formulate
...clusion that government should strictly formulates various laws at present so that differe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2570.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25562372188 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81946768088 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431492842536 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 808.2 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9889072694 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.380952381 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414452894205 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144324983465 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197250291002 0.0758088955206 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248345581014 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223296974384 0.0667264976115 335% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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