A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
A child is enrolled in school so that he or she can take the first step towrds becoming a well-educated human being. Moreover, it helps the student slowly get upto pace with the world that is working around him, ulitmately getting admit into a college and graduating as a sane human. The above prompt suggests that a nation should require all it's students to study the same national curriculum unitl they enter college. I completely support such an initative and I provide the reasoning for the same in the paragraphs below.
A national curriculum would be set by the people who occupy the position of highest authority in the country. For example, the education minster of a country along with his or her peers. These individuals have been elected into the position because they have the right mindset and skills to decide the right courses that should form the curriculum. These ministers would know very well, the current requirements of the country and how the world is evolving as a whole. Independent schools could be oblivious to the current and future skill-sets that would be expected of a student. Therefore, a national curriculum would help ascertain that all the students, getting education as part of a national curricula would be on the same page, and it would prevent a group of students from missing out on valuable knowledge.
Schools can have a bias towards the courses or the subjects which they include as part of their curriculum. It can be a possibility that if a crtain school has a good mathematics and science faculty. They would be better equipped at imparting knowledge related to mathematics and science and would probably neglect the other courses due to the school' lack of expertise. Such an act could impede the growth of a kid in his or her latter years of education. For example, a student who wishes to be an archaeologist would suffer during the college years since he or she has week basic knowledge about history as a subject. To prevent such a discrepancy from happening at school level. It is ideal that the kids go through a curriculum, that has been decided upon by by the higher levels of a nation, so that such a predicament does not fall upon any student.
Lastly, a national curriculum would please the parents as whole since they will know what their kids would be studying in school. Parents can also have a sense of relief since they know the curriculum has been approved upon by trusted leaders of the country. Parents can also help their kids with their daily chores such as home-work and assignments since they will have a good knowledge about the courses their kids will learn about. Prior knowledge of the courses can enable the parent to be prepared in asisting their kids with school-work.
In sum, I am a strong advocate of the initative that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Such an initiative will ensure the kids to be at the same level when they graduate from school. And as a result make sure that no kid has lost out on crucial aspects of courses during their schooling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...t by the people who occupy the position of highest authority in the country. For example, ...
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Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'curriculum'?
Suggestion: curriculum
...getting education as part of a national curricula would be on the same page, and it would...
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Line 5, column 761, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: by
... curriculum, that has been decided upon by by the higher levels of a nation, so that ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2578.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 542.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75645756458 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5863631577 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448339483395 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8990859647 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199465727547 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674234952002 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917166060799 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142461432431 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074767338232 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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