A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is the key to the prosperity of a country and well-designed curriculums are important for a successful education. To ensure students of a country to receive the best education, it is understandable that the country will make use of its best education talent to design a well-rounded curriculum for all students before they enter college. However, this methodology also has its drawbacks and may not be the best choice for all the students.
A well-designed national curriculum has a lot of benefits. It enables the country to provide the best quality education to its students. The best education professionals of the country can collaborate to work on a well-rounded curriculum and makes it available to all the students within the country. On top of that, it will ensure all the teachers will be able to follow the same training and standard from the best so they can provide the best teaching to the students. Compare to a chaotic education system where teachers of different levels of credentials to design their own curriculum, a national curriculum will greatly improve the standard of education to the mass public and benefit the country as a whole.
In addition to that, a national curriculum also makes it relatively fair for students of different backgrounds to have access to higher education. Because every student is educated in a similar way, their exposure to knowledge and the level of training they received will be comparable. It is easier to select the more talented students given everyone is educated in a similar way and it puts students from less developed areas at less disadvantage. The overall fairness of this education system will make people more united and it is beneficial for a country.
However, this system also has its flaws. Not every student is the same and not everyone has the same goal in their lives. A national curriculum that focuses on STEM is not the best choice for the students whose interests are in art and sports. These students may struggle in the national curriculum and they will not have the energy to fully develop their interests and talents.
In summary, a national curriculum has a lot of merits in general. It works best for the interests of the majority of the country's population. However, this rigid education system will not work for every student. Alternatives for special cases should be available to make it a well-rounded education system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, in addition, in general, in summary, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02227722772 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91237564858 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391089108911 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7126882259 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.45 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259968241777 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964301372205 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633823307751 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172759304768 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637278059525 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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