A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

The above mentioned policy that is based on homogenizing the curricular program for all the students of one country may have some positive aspects coming with its implementation but also negative sides that might out weight the benefits of it.
On one hand, it is intuitive to conclude that the implementation of such policy would create a common level plain field for all the students, until college starts. In this way nobody would have a relative superior competitive advantage on the rest. At the same time a uniform national curriculum makes it easier for the national Department or Ministry of Education to assess performance on the different regions of their country, besides the fact that making changes to one single program is easier than giving to schools total freedom of choice and ending up with many curricular paths to evaluate. But is this beneficial in the long term? What are the potential drawbacks of such policy?
One reason why most modern Western nations allow for freedom of choice of curricular field of study even before entering college os a direct outspring of modern basic rights of each individual. In terms of the new International system based on principles of neo-liberalism a student should be free to make their own choices when deciding what to study.
A further reason for giving local governments and regions freedom to design their own programs springs from the fact that students have different sets of skills and may want to specialize in a specific group of subjects. Not allowing this would result in substantial opportunity costs for students since the time spent on some forced subjects is time that has not been spent on a subject of interest. In addition, students may consistently underperform on those required subject since they would decide that time would be better spent on something that creates positive utility for their future. This is the reason why schooling systems such as Italy and the United Kingdom allow students to choose their intended field of study since the first year of high school. British students go on choosing their A and B levels from a wide range of subjects and Italian students decide whther they want to focus on scientific studies, humanistic studies or more technical fields that allow them to rapidly enter the job market.
An additional question that could be made against the stated policy is how could the government know what’s best for their student and what’s the best curriculum to design. There may be the risk of setting up a curricular path because the government wants to create a specific and intended kind of work force to reach precise political objectives. Sometimes, a national uniform curriculum is established because a strong form of censorship exists. The Soviet Union is a perfect example of country in the past where a strong control and revision of the subjects was constantly enforced in order to force citizens into complying with the rules of the Communist party.
Lastly, shouldn’t a country foster talent by allowing them to focus even more on their respective fields of study? Albert Einstein is the pefect example of mathematical and physics prodigy that was forced into the standardized schooling system of Germany. Such a system may be detrimental to individuals that show talent for subjects that may not be included in the program but based on the common evaluation criteria, they may be considered not adequate enough for academic career.
In conclusion, a government should not impose such strong limits on its students. Despite the presence of potentially different curricular paths, a government can still impose some common guidelines and design some periodic common tests in order to assess the level of its students in the different regions of its country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, lastly, may, so, still, as for, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 99.0 58.6224719101 169% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3179.0 2235.4752809 142% => OK
No of words: 625.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0864 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70766331733 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4832 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 984.6 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1633248579 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4090909091 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226671017644 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564313125 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485915416362 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101190884489 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377417627752 0.0667264976115 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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