A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
I disagree with the above statement, as it based on a thinking that all the students are the same, having the same mental and physical ability and the same area of interests. Moreover, the above recommendation suggests that if any student wants to work as a teacher of geography he/she has to study the mathematics till that person enters the college, which is not going to help him ever in the future.
Firstly, everyone studying the same curriculumn would definitely lead to an exam environment where everyone is tested on the same basis, our past is full of such examples that have shown us time and again that everyone is not the same for example the business tycoon Jack Ma who was rejected from several job interviews believing that he is incompetent to work in a professional environment has proven everyone wrong by the highly successful company Ali Baba owned by Jack Ma. Moreover, the greatest rapper of all times Eminem who was failed in ninth standard, nobody at that time could have thought that he would become such a huge star. therefore, a same testing procedure for everyone is the worst thing that can happen to education.
Secondly, the above idea is going to force everyone to obtain the knowledge about the same subjects and even if they are not nterested in them like a future engineer is forced to read history till the time he/ she enters the university. The main thought any student is going to have in this this system is that am I going to ever use this subject in the life, the answer is simple and clear no, never. Then why to force them to do this thing.
Many people would argue for the above recommendation saying that everyone should have the basic knowledge of every subject on this thing I would like to bring their attention toward the policy of Indian Government that has suggested that the basic knowledge is till 8th or maximum 10th standard as the policies also suggest that the compulsory education is till these classes only. Then people should be free tochoose their stream and move to the areas of their interests.
In a nutshell, we understand that the common criteria for education will lead to mental stress rather than benifitting the students and this would lead to the fall in the standards of the graduates as they would not be able to have specific knowledge of a specific subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
...thought any student is going to have in this this system is that am I going to ever use t...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ife, the answer is simple and clear no, never. Then why to force them to do this thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68856447689 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50206608879 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515815085158 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.924225025 60.3974514979 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.7 118.986275619 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.1 23.4991977007 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126329659416 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539512146299 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426144338169 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735592697799 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487623791097 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 14.1392134831 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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