A nation should require all of its students to study same national curriculum until they enter the college.
education is considered as the main factor which is critical for shaping the life of an individual. From his behaviour in the society to his career everything is decided by the kind of education he has recieved. Moreover, it is something that everyone should get without any cast, colour or religion. The most crucial stage of educational life of a person is the the period before he enters the college, as it clears his basics and he becomes logically clear about the path he wants to follow to reach his goals. Some believe that all students of a particular nation should study the same curriculum untill they enter the college. However, I do not agree with this statement, because different students like different subjects and they want to persue different fields. Thus, a person should study the cirriculum that would help him in making his carrer in the feild that he likes.
For example, if a person wants to do major in mathematics, he would be forced to study other subjects like linguistics or english literature if has to study same natuional curriculum. which is not good because it won't help him much in finding a desired profession. he would end up wasting his time and resources in subjects he is not even intrested in. Not only this but spending time in classroom for these unnecessary subjects would end up giving him anxiety and physical exertion. he would loose his focus which is required for the courses of paramount importance to him.
Moreover, if he studies the subjects that he likes, he would give his hundred percent to excel in those subjects. His confidence level will boost and it will be easy for him to fulfill his dreams. His entire time would go in learning the subjects that are required and he may achieve success at a young age. By forcing them to study the same curriculum would create a hindrance in their path and this may be detrimental for the students as well as for the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71597633136 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56829273771 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9180925858 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.625 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18377165603 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075512563186 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144608551924 0.0758088955206 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131321340793 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643831346266 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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