Author says that all students should study same curriculum until they enter college. I strongly disagree with this suggestion for two reasons.
Schools are considered important part of students' lifes. As every human is differ from each other at one point, it is absurd for compelling everyone making same things. According to statistics, half of the one class's students are interesting in going to college and further education. Other half is curious about art, sports etc. So, it makes no sense compulsory teaching these to other half which is want to continue its education in college in scientific or any similar field and vice versa.
Secondly, not all of the schools have equal capacity to teaching same subjects. For instance, surveys show that most of the schools which located in rural areas have very little ability to teach subjects like music, technology, sports etc. Therefore, if they compelled to teach this subjects like other central schools of country, it will be almost not effective. Instead of this, school administration can substitute this subjects with others which can be done pragmatically more effective.
Of course, some argue that all students should study same curriculum for fairness and other reasons. But, as i already mentioned, not everybody have same interest, skill or chance. Schools should support, motivate and navigate its students for reaching their goals.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...rt of students lifes. As every human is differ from each other at one point, it is abs...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...cs, half of the one classs students are interesting in going to college and further educati...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...field and vice versa. Secondly, not all of the schools have equal capacity to teaching...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30941704036 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60426563956 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1966052398 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20880329802 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840292156592 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11926603645 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166461010519 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11644633789 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...rt of students lifes. As every human is differ from each other at one point, it is abs...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...cs, half of the one classs students are interesting in going to college and further educati...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...field and vice versa. Secondly, not all of the schools have equal capacity to teaching...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30941704036 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60426563956 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1966052398 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20880329802 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840292156592 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11926603645 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166461010519 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11644633789 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.