A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
In today's world, almost every college requires an individual to acquire a basic level of education as standard criteria of qualification. Though many nations believe that such school level education requires the schools to follow a common curriculum to all the students, I, however would like to respectfully disagree with this notion. Applying the same national curriculum to all the students of an educational institution strips away their liberty to follow their interest; hence limiting their actual potential and leading to production of below average human resources for the nation.
When every students are fed the same national curriculum without allowing them any options to choose for themselves, they would be forced to follow even those subjects that has their least possible enthusiasm. This would lead to performing poorly on such subjects, while suppressing their actual passions they have for the subjects of their liking. That's why, the educational institutions of USA allows variety of options to choose for students in the form of electives. This encourages students to pursue their passions, as well as their dreams.
It is an evident fact that schools are indeed a preparatory stage for those students that opt for higher level education in colleges and university. Therefore, when we allow different students to select curriculum of their own preference, we are also assisting them in gathering as much helpful knowledge as that they can, that would be beneficial for them in colleges. There appears no benefit in forcing students to take up subjects that provide no substantial advantage for them in their college life.
Similarly, taking away the right to choose curriculum for oneself results in college feeding information to students about the subject they have no interest in. This results in the students taking up the courses just for the sake of grades. Such practice clearly is a waste of resources, since such forceful uptake of information leads to no good. Also, the young creative minds are also at loss, which would have flourished if they had been given knowledge on the subject that they prefer.
Hence, it is quite important for nations to have options of school curriculum that would allow students to choose the subjects for themselves. Such freedom of choosing their own curriculum is necessary to build a generation of strong human resources who know what they want and hence have acquired knowledge on the field of their own interests.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... have for the subjects of their liking. Thats why, the educational institutions of US...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2325 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70378322911 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4809482555 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8125 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222997825013 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820299079674 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565015059874 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140423921934 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529630635895 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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