A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
The issue represented over here is about the idea that weather there should be the same course all over the country or it should be the way it is right now. over here they are suggesting that the course should be the same nation wide until a student chooses the field of his/her choice. The idea of it migh seem advanageous but as we say every coin has two sides. Likewise this has its own pros and cons.
Firstly, if we think about it then we can see many good points if this change occur. Like there would be the same course for all the students and so the can all be judged on the basis of that. On the adaptive levels it would be reall helpful for them. Plus when the course will be same then we could have the exac idea of the potential of the child. even the children whose parents work in the companies where the get transfer to another state at that time the study of the child won't suffer. they can cop up with studies from where they exactly left. The idea of having the same course would help the child as they can internally discuus about the new ideas to move forward in life.
But when we think of the negative side then it actually outweighs the positive side of it. For an instance, the subjects won't be available in all the languages. so, that might cause a major inconvinience. The alnguage barrier may have an insidious effect on the learning of the child. Which in turn can affect the future of the child. even about the faculties who teach won't have the same knowledge and so the might not be able to teach ghe bhings of higher level. this would be a common problem in the rural areas. The lack of proper learning and knowledge would have bad outcome on the future ofthe country too.
I pen down saying that, the idea of having the same curriculum would in turn affect the future of the child in a negative way and so it should be avoided.
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... in turn affect the future of the child in a negative way and so it should be avoided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, may, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32485875706 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07495442315 2.79657885939 74% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494350282486 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7598966266 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.55 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184242699283 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516341105059 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675665368365 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119217856269 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679581417555 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 14.1392134831 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 48.8420337079 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 12.1639044944 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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