Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

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Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

men and women have physical differences from their birth, we can say that they are not equally suited for various works. In todays rapidly growing world we can define that female not as much as efficent as men. Nowadays women are giving neck to neck competition to men in many field of work. there are many great women have been there, who had done great work in their field. On the some extant we can partially agree with statement, in some of task women are not suitable for the work. On the flip side, women empowerment had sparked in society and many women rose in different eras. I would say that women are equivalent to the men.

To start with, In the work field like military services women were not suitable earlier, now women are eagerly taking part in the defence and also surpassing the toughest physical training of military. From this we can say that now women are becoming equal to men. I can that in the near women will surpass men in many work epoches. For example, The female astronaut from NASA Kalpna Chalva was the first lady to step on the moon and in galaxy. these ladies have become the example and inspiration for the other women in world. The older impression of girls have been changed now and they are endevouring their dreams.

Next, when a women gives a birth to a baby she sufferes from a ton of pain at that time, and that denotes that the women are mentally and physically strong enough in compare to men. also, after loss of plenty of blood every month they continue their routine to thrive.The physical differences doesn't define that they are weak and not suitable for the work. women have great emotional balance and it helps them to succeed them in their era.

On the other side, In many contries women are tend to be housewife because they that women's rudimentary work is to maintain their houses. On the flip side many developed countries encourage their women to come ahead and flourish. these countries provide many women development cells and in it they help them to achieve their goals. In many countries they have female presidents and prime ministers, who are very efficiently running their country. The best example in the Queen of Unitaed Kingdom.

To conclude, I would say that God had given us the same human body and brain, it has some differences in it, that doesn't define that their abilities to work in different tasks. The women are equally capable of doing work life men. From the physical differences we can't judge women to not to work in curtain field.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Men
men and women have physical differences fro...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...ving neck to neck competition to men in many field of work. there are many great women hav...
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Suggestion: There
...mpetition to men in many field of work. there are many great women have been there, w...
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Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... done great work in their field. On the some extant we can partially agree with sta...
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... some extant we can partially agree with statement, in some of task women are not...
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Suggestion: These
...lady to step on the moon and in galaxy. these ladies have become the example and insp...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...evouring their dreams. Next, when a women gives a birth to a baby she sufferes fr...
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Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Line 17, column 265, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for example, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65771812081 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26386493759 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465324384787 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8399521656 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95833333333 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381216869771 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121046267194 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665606926198 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225571241059 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505876372158 0.0667264976115 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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