a nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Essay topics:

a nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

A country should establish one ideal syllabus for all the students of that country. In todays rapidly growing world, education is intergal part of our life. The same curriculum throughout the country will make the education system more simple in compare to having many independent state boards and national boards. The independent board system gives freedom for the education, but on the other side it's is a more complex system. The same curriculum very benefitual for the students because the same curriculum is applied to them and their level will be same till they join their college streams. I would say that the national curriculum very much helpful for the students.

In the same syllabus system there will be same subjects and the study material through out the nation, so it will help students to improve their education level. The level of students after their higher secondary will be same. Also, the books and different study material will be same so any one can easily access to it from any place. The central system will predominantly focus on the core subjects and put the nation on center. In the curriculum they will only take subjects related to the nation like national history and national language. I would say that this will help to students to understand their country in more better and positive way.

Next, the national curriculum will have level of education throughout the nation, it will mitigate the comparison of ranking various education board. For example, in country like India there many education boards are working in their different state and central system. There is vast difference of education level between the state board and the central board. The state board includes the history and language of that particular region and the secondary language will be the national language. At the same time the level of examination and education is also different in both board. I would say that the central system of education will help it to reduce it.

On the flip side, The central curriculum create problems because their no inclusion of the state of regional languages, most of the citizens perfert to tech their children their mothertoungh on the primary basis. Also,to run the central curriculum system will be tougher than any other state system; because the central system will have a larger body to run and organize. It is a very much diffcult task.

To conclude, I would say that the central system has it's own pros and cons on with it. Anyhow it is much more benefitual to students of the country to learn the same syllabus and it will give them equal opprtunities.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are working in their different state and central system. There is vast difference...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96145124717 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48130799417 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403628117914 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4167795359 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1304347826 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1739130435 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.65217391304 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237952963184 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836919431935 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753320469265 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146647909816 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875695428822 0.0667264976115 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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