A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Education is an integral part of every student's life and is to choose wisely as their career depends on this decision. The recommendation here states that any nation should mandate all of its students to pursue the same national curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I partially agree with this recommendation as it can be done better in a few other ways. The following reasons explain my opinion.
Firstly, students need to learn about their religious and native culture. This can be learned by making them a part of the curriculum. For example, a student from Telangana needs to learn about the formation and local cultures which can be learned best by studying it as part of the curriculum. This example illustrates that if students study the same national curriculum may not have knowledge of local issues as they cannot be included in the syllabus and even if they were included the syllabus becomes vast and difficult to understand.
Secondly, Students from their childhood have their interests in their subjects and tend to choose the curriculum which gives more preference to those subjects. For example, a recent survey by the Student council suggested that Students who pursue their studies based on interests excel in their performance and learning. This example tells students if forced to take uninterested subjects might be less productive.
Lastly, This common curriculum can help the teachers very much as the can judge students equally while they enter their college and also teach effectively to each one equally. This can also make a good result for students.
If a common curriculum is made can benefit students by getting good lectures. However, student interest should be given the utmost priority for efficient and productive learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17301038062 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69483759047 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3905220502 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309829633413 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100594141852 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139347731927 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164480480481 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801169075609 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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