A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Essay topics:

A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

I agree that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

By studying same curriculum all over the nation, It will help teaching faculty to teach their subjects in different schools in different regions under faculty exchange program. when we have different curriculum all over the nation It becomes difficult for a faculty to teach in different region where curriculum is different.

When we have same curriculum all over the nation then It is easy to develop online course material for all students, as students required online research papers, Books, assingnments, video lectures all these things will be given to all students from one website if the curriculum is same for all.

Many students changes their schools because of their parents job and then at other region school there will new curriculum which will become difficult for these students to adjust with that curriculum so if we have same curriculum all over the nation then these students will study the same subjects that they were sudying before.

Same curriculum gives students idea about the national level compitition so they know that the curriculum which they are studying is implimented all over the nation so if they perform good in exam then they are performing good in all over the nation.

Hence, same curriculum should be implimented all over the nation in order to improve the teaching and learning process.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to teach' or 'teach'.
Suggestion: to teach; teach
...culum all over the nation, It will help teaching faculty to teach their subjects in diff...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...regions under faculty exchange program. when we have different curriculum all over t...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'change'.
Suggestion: change
...culum is same for all. Many students changes their schools because of their parents ...
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Line 11, column 112, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...er to improve the teaching and learning process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12552301255 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51804989427 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464435146444 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8567595186 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.0 118.986275619 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 23.4991977007 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.566753080531 0.243740707755 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.352915327724 0.0831039109588 425% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.251026110036 0.0758088955206 331% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388026230789 0.150359130593 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.255143754872 0.0667264976115 382% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.1392134831 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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