A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

prompt recomments that all of the students of a nation should study same curriculum untill college, instead of different curriculum in different province. Under some circumstance it is truth that a common core education curriculum is much more effective than different curriculum developed by different province. Insofar I am partially agree with the prompt recommendation because in some extend it is beneficial.

Admittedly, a well developed core curriculum can surpasses its limitations in most of the time and can help build a society where our childrens will be skillled and well informed member of our society. ethical development and cultural awareness building is much more easier in a central curriculum with the influence of varities cultural value included in the curriculum. A core curriculum meke it possible for the college faculty about the ability of the freshers including and their weakness and strength that helps create a course plan that serve them better. diverse topics included in a core corriculum and students also from differnt ethinical origin participate in the education that make the curriculum diverse and timely. purpose of a nation better served in the same curriculum that values the diverse view of the nation.

Further, it is also possible that a core corriculum can defeat fundamental purpose of the education. A curriculum soley developed by giving ephasis on majority of nation and minor ethinical people from different cultural and ethical value feel it embrassing and instead of enouraging education to their child; they can discourage their child to participate in the education. There is no value of decision and recommendation of the parents of the students in a core curriculum designed for the whole nation. ethical value and learning approach is different in differnt portion of a nation, that's why it is not easy to measure their ability and skill in some typical exams.

However, indipendance of curriculum development and augmentation of cultural and ethical value can be achived by the flexibility in curriculum development can encourage education in different nation where presents different ethnic group and most of them reluctant about the education where they learn new cultural value that differ from their very own tradition. A province based curriculum encourage enthusiastic participation of the parents to design a corrulum that their children will study in school. Less scope for the legislator to make way for their quirky and biased thinking about the education included in the curriculum.

In most of the cases it not easy to decide where a central curriculum or different curruculum for different region, with some limitations a core curriculum can do better in long because of its diverse way of thinking and development based on different perspective of a nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Prompt
prompt recomments that all of the students of ...
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prompt recomments that all of the students of a nation should study same ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ferent province. Insofar I am partially agree with the prompt recommendation because ...
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Line 1, column 390, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...e prompt recommendation because in some extend it is beneficial. Admittedly, a we...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'surpass'
Suggestion: surpass
...y, a well developed core curriculum can surpasses its limitations in most of the time and...
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Suggestion: Ethical
...nd well informed member of our society. ethical development and cultural awareness buil...
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...and cultural awareness building is much more easier in a central curriculum with the influe...
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...e a course plan that serve them better. diverse topics included in a core corriculum an...
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...make the curriculum diverse and timely. purpose of a nation better served in the same c...
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Suggestion: Ethical
...rriculum designed for the whole nation. ethical value and learning approach is differen...
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Suggestion: that's
...ferent in differnt portion of a nation, thats why it is not easy to measure their abi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37276785714 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96792751765 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421875 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.246441191 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.4375 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253330901335 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103284755345 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115233690465 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159727396484 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548708706816 0.0667264976115 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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