University should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The speaker claims that university students should take a variety of courses outside the student's field of the study. Prompt recommends that university should require their students to take a variety of courses without the students wish. I am agree that to make a responsible member of a society it is needed that student should take a variety of courses but I am disagree with the recommendation that university put instruction in course selection.
Admittedly, a variety of courses in taken in university help build a society where every member of the society not only expert in any given field but also a person with knowledge in different field of the study outside his or her area of expertise. A person with variety of knowledge, will help the person to be a more responsible and well-known person of the society. A balance society is most important to make a better society than a society with full of expert in different field but less known or unknown about the other field of the study. In case of contribution to make society a better place a person with expertise in the field of the software engineering plays less important role than a person with expertise in any given field and also well-known about the ethics, culture, and history of the society. he or she can make more contribution for the social well-being than a person with much more expertise in one field and ignorant about the social value and culture.
Conversely, a student taking a variety of courses in the university should make him or her failure in his career because of extra time, effort, and money one put on a field of study where he or she has less or not any interest to learn. This type of hinderance in course selection, make students study a variety of courses without their wish of study in most of the cases can have a very negative effect, like instead of responsible member of the society he or she can be the burden of the society because of not being able to be expert in any field or not being able to what he or she wanted to be. A variety of courses in university in many cases make students defocused from the his or her area of the interest and instead of an enthusiastic learning a students learning can be impeded in many cases because of lack of interest in those courses given by the university, a student wasn't interested to take.
A open course system where student should take courses that they are interested in learing make them a avid learner and has a great chance of following their passion instead of some conventional courses imputed by university authority. courses that enable to follow their passion and interest make them able to success in long run and much more chance to shine and live a good life career life than a students who learned many things but not has expertise in field of study can make a student suffer in career in life. most importantly, to be a responsible member of the society it is obvious that one should able to live a good life and make contribution in any field he or she interested. By giving variety of courses in university, there is a chance that we kill the passion of a student and make them a member of society where he or she live a life like morose, instead of a enthusiastic member who can make society prouder and helping in development of the society.
In conclusion, it is not certain that taking courses what students want to take in university make them expert in that specific it is also true that by taking variety of courses in university, a student failed in life but more important is follow the interest of the student.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...courses without the students wish. I am agree that to make a responsible member of a ...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...ould take a variety of courses but I am disagree with the recommendation that university...
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Line 5, column 816, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...s, culture, and history of the society. he or she can make more contribution for t...
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Line 9, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to be expert in any field or not being able to what he or she wanted to be. A v...
^^
Line 9, column 680, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...many cases make students defocused from the his or her area of the interest and instead...
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Line 9, column 885, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...rses given by the university, a student wasnt interested to take. A open course ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
... student wasnt interested to take. A open course system where student should...
^
Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hey are interested in learing make them a avid learner and has a great chance of ...
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Line 13, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Courses
...ourses imputed by university authority. courses that enable to follow their passion and...
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Line 13, column 400, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...e and live a good life career life than a students who learned many things but not has exp...
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Line 13, column 520, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...ake a student suffer in career in life. most importantly, to be a responsible member...
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Line 13, column 629, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ious that one should able to live a good life and make contribution in any field ...
^^
Line 13, column 879, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...she live a life like morose, instead of a enthusiastic member who can make societ...
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Line 17, column 241, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...nt failed in life but more important is follow the interest of the student.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, of course, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 113.0 58.6224719101 193% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2968.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 644.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60869565217 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0375743251 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62753246134 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.305900621118 0.4932671777 62% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 986.4 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9447132896 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.5 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273259493269 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142739497166 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103587146224 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212079889424 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121057192055 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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