A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Early education is very significant in childhood for imposing conducts, manners, cultures, values etc. in student's life. A nation primary concern is to spread the awareness of literacy in every states of the nation. Perphas every nation has taken some keen steps in formulating the early education for chidren. But the question is does the educations system covers every aspects of cirriculam in their syllabus? While some people feel that a goverment and as well as private institution body should exist to formulate the structure of education, while most are of the opinion that goverment only should take care of all the aspects of children's study cirriculum in education system. Thus, I agree with the author that nation should enure that all of its students impose the formal nation cirriculum education system authorized by the goverment body.
The chief reason for my view that every student's education will be judged on baised education system. This means that any student opting for private education system, will be difficult to assess it's knowledge, culture or values.For example, CBSE board in India constitutes its own way of education and cirriculum. Hence, I believe that if every student is on the same level of education system, it will be easy to analyze student's behaviour.
Anathor reason why I agree with the author is that the fees structure will be constant and equivocal accross all the states of the nation. Moreover, goverment can provide various scholorships to students based on merit to incourage more and more interest in studies. For instance, a private institutelike CBSE has it's own fees structure,culture etc.Thus, it is necessary to imbibe formal nation cirriculum to support nation's education increament.
In sum, for all these reasons state above, I therefore conclude that having an centralized learning system would truly help to flourish children's education in a systematic manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly help to flourish childrens education in a systematic manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28990228013 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79930615904 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6248475803 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22059895642 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895316475909 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713702079679 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12929406516 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758976220197 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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