The recommendation that all the students of a must study the same national curriculum until they enter college is both advantageous and disadvantageous in many situation .
The move to make students study the same national curriculum is in general a welcoming move as there is uniformity throughout the nation , that is , all the students irrespective of the region or state they live in aren't deprived of quality education. Since all the students receive the same quality of education , this move ensures that all students are imbibed with the same quality of education and noone has an edge over the other at the competitive stage once they are done with schooling. That is if the students are writing an entrance exam to get into college , there won't be any bais which is not possible if there is no common curriculum as different students would've studied different subjects or the depth at which they studied the same subjects may vary, this would result in some students having an edge over the other . Implementation of a common curriculum precludes this aspect.
Making the curriculum common throughtout the nation also acts as a quality check on the standard of education, to elaborate, since this curriculum is going to be common throughout the country , the education board of the country has put in more effort in drafting the syllabus so that best quality of education prevails throughout. It hands over more responsibility to the education board on how the young minds of the nation are shaped and this makes them adopt necessary measures and put in more care while drafting the curriculum .
Thus to conclude , I would agree with the recommendation to have a common curriculum through the nation as the it bring a sense of order and uniformity throughout the nation and simultaneously ensuring that all the students receive good quality of education and brings a sense of equality amongst them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02208201893 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88444702271 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457413249211 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0312443896 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.0 118.986275619 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.625 23.4991977007 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364960893147 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188366798144 0.0831039109588 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129804317724 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2598146427 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133032507835 0.0667264976115 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.