A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
A nation should not require all of the students to follow the same curriculum before entering school. One standard can not improve millions of lives and millions of chances at a time. curriculum needs to be designed with having thousands of directions and opportunities.
Most intellects get flourished in vigilant situation. Besides, every intellects gets its recognition with circumstance and environment on its upbringing. inherent qualities get direction from the nature they belong. these become circumscribed with limited scope. Only curriculum can not decide the amenities it can create for individuals.
The school time is the best time for prospering any good speciality among the students. The same national curriculum limits the scope to the possibilities. Puberty is the time when human changes its amorphous state to a rigid structure. Confinement during this period hamstrungs them. Thy can be compared to the clay which can turn into anything according to the space they are overt to. Molds can disable these buds.
As the fingers on our hand not of resemble size,so our effort to make them of same will break those. Thus, different personality has different inherent qualities. Proper nourishment opens ample possibilities. In that case, different curriculum helps and creates this environment.
Government should think of various curriculum for students in primary levels too. A curriculum is not the thing this precious body require.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ives and millions of chances at a time. curriculum needs to be designed with having thousa...
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...ance and environment on its upbringing. inherent qualities get direction from the nature...
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... direction from the nature they belong. these become circumscribed with limited scope...
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...se buds. As the fingers on our hand not of resemble size,so our effort to ma...
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...ingers on our hand not of resemble size,so our effort to make them of same will br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 225.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50666666667 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97494392519 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657777777778 0.4932671777 133% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.924865591 60.3974514979 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.95 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.25 23.4991977007 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.05 5.21951772744 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196026364852 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525979354385 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714696958488 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103850175157 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518565670569 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 48.8420337079 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.49 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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