A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe certain circumstances which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
While it might be beneficial to have a robust overview of subjects and curriculum of studies, the time spent studying a wide array of subjects may just have been more effective if properly directed to a more specialized curriculum germane to proposed college specialization.
A nation should ensure that her students have a more in-depth curriculum partaining to their proposed college course of study.
Firstly, the time spent studying multiple subject informed by a general curriculum which doesn't help in future endeavors in college might be shot on the leg as student would go to college with a general overview of knowlege from different subjects without necessarily having a solid foundation for their proposed course of study.
Although it is also argued that having a wide overview is very helpful in cases were certain students are unsure of their future course of study and soecialization. This general curriculum would allow them a good feel of a wide range of subject from which they could later gain interest from a few. Pre-college is also a time with alot of andrealanine and alot of other hormones working, also full of uncertainty and so this broad array will often be a guide in case of a change of mind in career path.
Furthermore, having a uniform curriculum would not be cost effective as well as time efficient as there would be more student per teacher ratio thereby creating a need for employment of more staff and increase in the amount of student per class which will in turn allow for the need of big class room spaces /blocks or longer time hours since there might be need for rotation of subjects per day in class spaces that are small. Also, the amount of money been spent on training students in a uniform curriculum is totally unnecessary been that thes students will not need this broad range of subjects for their preferred college major and most of the times these broad courses serve as a distraction from the actual specialized courses pertinent to their career goal.
Thus it is without any doubt that a nations should not require all of their students to be thought the same curriculum but in reserve should allow foe an indepth curriculum tailored to their preferred field of studies at college level since this is cost effective and resource effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90281329923 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63265910503 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.047607484 60.3974514979 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 213.0 118.986275619 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.4444444444 23.4991977007 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152928712735 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759922896444 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446875437763 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966968770082 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405004455694 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 14.1392134831 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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