The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,
industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Why would it not be said that cooperation should be the necessary principle to instill in preparing the young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields in a well thinking society ?
Clearly, cooperation should be the bedrock in the development of the young upon which other development are hinged upon.
Firstly, societies should instill cooperation and not competition in their young since every living organism has natural tendencies to be competitive for various reasons not limited to survival, pride, territoriality e.t.c. It has been observed that the very essence of competitiveness has lead to a lot of bellicose and cynical behavior in many world leaders which has led to wars causing myriads of death and destruction of many civilization and so it could be argued that if such world leaders had been imbibed with such virtues a cooperation the world could have been far more peaceful and devoid of such hardship.
Although it is often said that competition brings out the best in human since it drives your to your limits and by doing an epiphany could occur which could be a mind blowing scenario for such an individual. But this very competitive capacities of men is what drove rulers like Adolf Hitler to a martial way of life, waging war with other countries in other to be the supreme leader and prove his country was first in everyway.
Additionally, a society that trains it young with such principles as cooperation have created room for a far more conducive environment for sharing ideas and which would in turn help the society to have burgeon in development since it’s people will naturally be able to work together and thereby moving the society forward.
Moreover, cooperation brings about a prevalence of happiness and cheerfulness since there will be far more positive energy in such society from their homes to their work places to their leadership and so this cheerfully energy would allow for better productivity and conjoined growth for it’s people.
Ultimately, a shown in this report, it is without any doubt that any forward looking country would train it’s young to be cooperative and not competitive since the world in it’self is competitive and misguided competition often result in the negative unlike cooperation which most often connotes a positive mannerism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18897637795 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8623808045 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511811023622 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.142602977 60.3974514979 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 247.125 118.986275619 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.625 23.4991977007 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18383222204 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994910158767 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626011876969 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108493718286 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629588203018 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 14.1392134831 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 48.8420337079 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.