Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline; students cannot be motivated by school or college alone.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A school can be defined as institution meant to guide, train and develop individuals to be useful to themselves and the society at large.
Clearly, schools and colleges have an undisputed position in the learning process of all members from the students to staff to the management staff. As the saying goes we can only keep learning.
It is without any doubt that learning has to be directed and so as to bring out intended result as compared to learning personally without a truly defined channel or path.
Firstly, since education and the importance of going to school is now a generally accepted fact, this will in turn mean that children at an early age begin school as so the schools have become a part of our learning process since to are there for the majority of the year and in are nascent stages. As seen in many developed countries like the France, China and the United states of America, school have been organized in such a way that they aod in the total development of the young in terms of social, physical emotional an d mental concern since they their school provide school and college inclined to help develop the talents of the young far better than they could imagine.
Although it can learning can be primarily a matter of personal discipline since all that is learnt at school is not total and it only best absorbed and utilized by those who go back in their quiet time to appraise themselves and all they have learnt, this is not to say that the school is still not very important in that it has presented the student with a guide.
In the life of some of the most notables including Bill Gates Steve Jobs amongst others, it could be argued that school was not a major determinant of their learning or success being that they dropped out of school but clearly schooling had given the an edge as the schooling had allowed for them to have learned past rudimentary concerns.
Additionally, schools been an assembly of different people of divergent background, it allow for social learning as students learn to cooperate with others, learn good cooperation and sportsmanship which they cannot develop by themselves as b these can only be developed by daily interaction in a conducive environment. It has being studied that those who do not attend school have always had a lack of certain skills not limited to communication and other requisite technical knowledge though with some ingenuity are successful in their chosen fields
Finally, the school should always be considered the basic and cogent success of learning upon which a footing for other learning process continues as it give the students the necessary tool to develop into their best potential
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dents to staff to the management staff. As the saying goes we can only keep learni...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...bt that learning has to be directed and so as to bring out intended result as compared t...
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Line 7, column 525, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... in terms of social, physical emotional an d mental concern since they their schoo...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...n they could imagine. Although it can learning can be primarily a matter of personal d...
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Line 11, column 248, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
... school but clearly schooling had given the an edge as the schooling had allowed for t...
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Line 13, column 88, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
...rent people of divergent background, it allow for social learning as students learn t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h they cannot develop by themselves as b these can only be developed by daily int...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty are successful in their chosen fields Finally, the school should always be con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82505399568 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59706088046 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509719222462 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.917592099 60.3974514979 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.4 118.986275619 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.3 23.4991977007 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216434136495 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936824449071 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472990858219 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110577152992 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339254749104 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 14.1392134831 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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