Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline; students cannot be motivated by school or college alone.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagreewith the statement and explain your reasoning for the position yo

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Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline;

students cannot be motivated by school or college alone.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree

with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.

In developing and supporting your position,

you should consider ways in which the statement

might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

College can be a time of great exploration where one can find their interests and pursue a career.In the United Sates, college is also considered a gateway to a

good-paying job and a decent livelihood. Colleges exist to teach people on a specific topic. However one cannot simply be motivated to learn by attending college classes.

There are more factors that contribute to person's desire to learn.

There are people who enter colleges without the knowledge of what they want to study. When one exits high school at the age of eighteen, some do not know all the available career options

they can atain. Upon entering college, they are forced to select random classes in order to fulfill graduation requirements and some pick the ones that sound easy just so they can be

sure they will pass the class. For example, students that have taken a spanish course or spanish is their native language will choose spanish as a course elective

because they know they will do well in the class. However, a degree in spanish may not be what these students wish to pursue and therfore will not be motivated to learn.

One needs discipline and knowledge of what degree they want to pursue in order for learning to occur.

To have personal discipline means that one has to be able to deny themselves some freedom in order to learn. When pursuing a degree in college, this may happen.

Sometime one has to choose whether they should go out with friends to see a movie the night before an important exam testing their knowledge or the night before a class

discussion is scheduled.This student then will deny themselves the pleasure of taking the night off to socialize with friends.

Of course learning does not require the absolute denial of pleasurebut some sacrifices are required.

It is true that colleges in ways can help motivate students to learn. There are resources that that assist in helping students with essays and projects. However,

a certain amount of discipline is still required to use these resources.If a student does not care much about the topic of the course, they will not care about whether

they have good writing skills. One can not simply learn how to write a cohesive essay on their own. They ussually need guidance from others. Asking for guidance from an experienced

professional requires self discpline.

Being a college student and pursuing a degree requires much learning. In order to learn about a specific topic, one needs to discpline themselves. This discpline occurs by having a

strong sense of your goals and aspirations and denying yourself of activities that will not help you learn knew material. Colleges can be a motivation for certain individuals

but without the drive and desire to learn, students will not get very far in their prifessional lives

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, of course, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2362.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99365750529 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55796829927 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492600422833 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.8473542049 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4166666667 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7083333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158387595157 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567807961914 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473216772778 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581200272255 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447124454787 0.0667264976115 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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