The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Can the achievements of a few be defined as an evidence of a great nation ?
While it is common for there to be a cosmetic outlook of a nation because of a few achievers, prosperity is most often defined by the lives of the common man.
Though the achievement of the rulers, artists, or scientists is by every means a measure of a great nation and it’s affluent, it is just a minute fraction of the total people and might not be a reliable representation.
In African countries, it is typical for the rulers, artist or scientist achievements to be showcased as a façade to the inner rot of the country and state of hardship for the common man. Their rulers loot the the common wealth to build and empower themselves while the commoners remain in abject poverty.
Most importantly, a nation that has not been able to deal with it’s rudimentary issues not limited to food, health care, shelter and access to other basic amenities and infrastructure for the welfare of it’s people is by no means great as the general representation of the country is often defined by the standard of living of it’s people.
Additionally, if the general welfare of a people is not prioritized then the achievement of a few might not stand for anything as it has been seen often times how nations collapse due to poor standard of living, the people degenerate to various social vices, decadent and there is terror if not properly managed as seen in countries in the middle-east, Africa, North America and Asia.
Ultimately, a nation that prioritizes the welfare of it’s people is often regarded as a great nation as there is harmony and support growth, prosperity and equity which is by far a better representation of great.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...p for the common man. Their rulers loot the the common wealth to build and empower them...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...p for the common man. Their rulers loot the the common wealth to build and empower them...
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Line 11, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: little might
...t prioritized then the achievement of a few might not stand for anything as it has been s...
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Line 11, column 134, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[6]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has often been seen
... few might not stand for anything as it has been seen often times how nations collapse due to poor ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85953177258 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92303305185 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471571906355 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.737204522 60.3974514979 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.625 118.986275619 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.375 23.4991977007 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149125387664 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710292081573 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472754119786 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796161950452 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432975238977 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 14.1392134831 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.