The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Cooperation is always greater than competition. The world runs on this principle.
If we look at today's top bluechip companies, they are moving towards shared resources (Amazon's AWS, Google's Cloud,etc) to ensure they stay in the right track and to develop. I would strongly agree with the given prompt that sense of cooperation should be instilled rather than competition among the young people for making a better good.
Overall development comes from empathy rather than competition. For example,
College students should cooperate among themselves in assignments and case studies without holding on for the competition. Only if they cooperate , there will be a mutual benefit. Young people should be empathic when handling issues. If they once start working in the real world business. They need to handle lots of situations which would require them to think emphatically for more sensible solutions. This can be developed if they are first instilled with this feeling among them in their initial stages. Infact, any competition can be won in a real way only if one approaches emphatically rather than a cut throat competitiveness.
Cooperation will also fetch in lot of innovative ideas which will be helpful for an individuals/organisations growth. Ten working minds can result in a much better result than one individual brain putting in all the efforts. For instance, if we look at the current world scenario,Startups are the new age business models. If one carefully understands and analyses how these startups work, It is very clear that cooperation plays a trivial role . The employees have to work together with each other to pool in ideas and have to address them with logic. The startup bosses would have to work closely with other startups in the game to always be uptodate with the new market trends and to ensure continuous development. This will give them more exposure and allows new ideas to flow in from various sources.
Cooperation always bears a fruit of success no matter what. It helps in building relationships and also nurtures self improvement. We need to impart cooperation among the young for a better and healthy future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, still, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19142857143 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98857020105 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562857142857 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4110568871 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5909090909 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162766347454 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468442428854 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500176378749 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890996421585 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314543283494 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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