a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

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a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

It is often referred that everyone should be at the same level for a game to be fair, but that does not imply academics need to imbibe a similar logic. There needs to be a standard national cirriculum which allows every individual to study the decided curriculum mandatorily with an option of elective subject with their choice.

Every individual posesses a varied set of liking and disliking activities and so is the case when it comes to academic subjects. If there is freedom for choice of elective subjects along with standard subjects, then students would love to study what interests them. It is difficult to maintain a single syllabus with varied subjects of interests.

Having single curriculum nationwide would be difficult to maintain as public and private institutes may differ in their curriculum. If same portion is followed throughout the nation excluding private institutes then chaos among students is likely to occur and it is a difficult task to make them foll

There is a need of a central authority to decide the curriculum for entire nation which might not go well with other bodies such as teachers, professors, etc. It would be difficult to come to a concluding set of syllabus due to clash of the ideology among individuals.

Modern world is evolving in all its aspects and thus these imporvements need to be included in the curriculum for knowledge of the students. Collecting a congruent nationwide list of advancements is possible in this digital world but is not hassle-free.
These knowings of advancements in every field should be known to students before they enter the college, so that they do not get overwhelmed by the new concepts.

One can come to the conclusion by saying that there is a need for a standard nationwide curriculum with minimal constraints and a panel of authorities to maintain this curriculum and keep it updated.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and a panel of authorities to maintain this curriculum and keep it updated.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, thus, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01916932907 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87279967677 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520766773163 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9788214601 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.916666667 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209913095672 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662901573652 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579040968091 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956204167285 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415112221947 0.0667264976115 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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