A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
The statement given here talks about having the same curriculum for all the students of the nation until they enter college. Though this approach has its self backdrops I would agree to it. In a vast country like India despite having a vast range of customs, achieving a common curriculum is really a big nut to deal with. Bringing People from Kashmir to Kanyakumari under one stand is seemingly impossible.
A common curriculum until the college time, will do a lot to the country's development. As all the people are given equal oppurtunity to get them going. No student will be given high priority, no student will be given lower priority. At the end of the day, a student either from a government school background or from a corporate school background had learnt the same subjects as all his counterparts in the country. So this will provide a common scale of measuring intellectual ability of students across the country by having a common exam.
On doing so government of the country would gain some faith in people. As they are providing equal oppurtunity to everyone. A rich kid or a poor kid doesn't matter anymore then. All the kids can have access to same sources to learn. It all depends on how the student is actually involved into the studies. This would definitely make our country stand top as literacy rate is going to raise and a great literacy rate means a great country with more oppurtunities.
I would like to mention few backdrops of having same curriculum . One such is how to bring all the people to one stand? Because different people have different goals in their life to accomplish. So if all the people are forced to follow same curriculum, I bet there will be protests against the idea. Also some rich people may not like themselves studying same as other middle class people study, this may be because of their ego,pride. So they would try to deviate from this idea. Also standing on the argument that if everyone studies same syllabus then everyone would get the same oppurtunities is not liable . Because the conditions in which a student studies is also going to matter the most. Teachers teaching those students may not be of same intellectual capability. So one wouldn't get to fully utilise this scheme.
We all know how mid day meal scheme failed to attract students to governmental schools in India.This is beacause of lack of quality education,good teachers and good curriculum. However, this scheme of having common curriculum would definitely attract more and more students towards governmental schools but only if they improve thier teaching standards and cleanliness in school premises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88590604027 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7095461189 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498881431767 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0708024011 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8888888889 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.03703703704 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270991729934 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713099479666 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764717271819 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14707167768 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644806837618 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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