How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Movies and Television have become essential things in our lives. Irrespective of the class, whether they are rich or not, people are willing to spend a lot of money on both movies and television. I personally believe these things have influenced our lives in both positive and negative ways. I also believe that positive things are a lot more impactful than negative ones. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, both movies and television have become the primary form of entertainment for many. In the olden days, they used to be a luxury for people. But now, thanks to the advancement in technologies, they are affordable by almost everyone and are coming with much high quality. At the end of the day, everyone needs some kind of entertainment to relax their minds, and movies, as well as television, are exactly fulfilling this purpose. For example, a rich man can go on to vacations or pubs to get relaxed and entertained. Average middle-class people cannot afford such things and prefer to go to a movie or watch television. This has become a daily routine for many.
Secondly, we can get a lot of information from both the T.V and movies. News from around the world is being telecasted 24/7 in many channels, this can be really helpful to empower people with knowledge. Also, apart from fictional movies, many social and science fictional movies are being made to make people socially responsible and gain knowledge while getting entertained by movies. Like a famous saying goes: “We remember the things we see much better than things we hear”, movies can even help students to gain knowledge from them and remember it for a long time. My personal life experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in my 4th grade, one of my teachers named Priyanka, used to English to us by showing some youtube videos. Such practice had helped us do better in English.
Finally, there are some negatives effects coming from movies and television. Nowadays, Many movies portraying violence to an extreme level. I think this would provocate teenagers to indulge in wrongdoings. On the other hand, some news channels on T.V are preferring to telecast conflicting things rather than useful ones to make a good TRP out of it. Activities like these keep spoiling the minds of many youngsters as well as adults. Eventually, it will have a bad effect on the nation itself because when citizens are spoiled, the nation will also be. For instance, recently, when there happened some riots between Muslims and Hindus in India, some news channels had kept on highlighting the conflict instead of trying to telecast programs that would help to resolve it. Many youngsters were influenced by this and left homes to participate in riots.
In conclusion, I’m of the opinion that although both the movie and the television have pros as well as cons, the pros outweigh the cons. Proper measures should be taken by authorities to limit the negative impact.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2494.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87109375 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64823008037 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529296875 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.751976344 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6551724138 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.79310344828 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127345066546 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337100554471 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031174844339 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706232531818 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190988723532 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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