Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave. Do you agree or disagree? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that adults expend their spare time either watching television or films . In the given scenario, it is perceived that people tend to be impacted by these things which means changes can be observed in the way behave. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly movies and television can influenced people’s behaviour to great extent. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, today’s children are privileged with electronic devices and internet. In addition, now it is convenient to watch any programs or shows whenever and however they prefer. Owing to this, they mostly engaged seeing their favorite series and most importantly after certain period they begin to behave as the characters in the show. Drawing from my own experience, my little sister, she is addicted to korean drama and she even imitate the character’s speech. She sometimes surprised us with korean dialect which we do not understand. Needless to say, how greatly she is impacted by the show. Therefore, if we remain persist in specific program then we unknowingly end up copying their behaviour.
Secondly, there are many films and programs that are worth watching and we want to watch them with the belief that we get to learn life lesson . To be more precise, some movies are depicting the real life situation which can be applicable to us as well and we knowingly desire to imitate the movie character such as the way he/she is handling tough situation, how they perceive things in life and so on. I myself is a compelling evidence of this. I used to watch biopic movies where biography of a person is shown and deliberately capture how they react to the distinct situation we confront in our life. Thus, it is utterly true that movie can impact a person to a great extent.
All things considered, people knowingly or unknowingly captivate the behaviour of any program character which fascinates them the most.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, i feel, in addition, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92835820896 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70660560171 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8166543707 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1176470588 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115510963063 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360042586385 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394946646103 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695663985641 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476177690246 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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