Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave. Do you agree or disagree? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
most people agree that every one types of leisure have an effect on society. in my view, movies and tv shows do have an effect on how human beings behave. I sense this way for 2 motives, which i will discover within the following essay.
to begin with, movies and tv provide society with a lot of bad role fashions, which many humans are inclined to emulate. these days, the so-referred to as “anti-hero” is a big part of popular culture. that is a form of character who acts badly around other human beings, ignores the rules of society, and has a misanthropic mindset. typically, these characters glorify excessive violence and drug use. My private enjoy is a compelling example of this. when i was in excessive faculty, a near buddy of mine become a huge fan of characters like this. while he started high faculty as a instantly-A scholar, he later started to watch quite a few movies that gave him the impression that taking tablets and combating with his classmates changed into fun and even suitable behavior. As a result, he barely finished high college and is now unemployed. furthermore, he has few job possibilities. Had he now not watched so many horrible movies, he would not be in such a determined scenario today.
however, tv indicates and films also provide human beings with quite a few superb position models. For folks that preference to observe healthy shows, there are numerous circle of relatives-friendly options to choose from. programs of this type exhibit functioning and solid families. They don’t just display conventional and conservative families, however worrying, loving people from many one-of-a-kind backgrounds and with many exceptional beliefs. for instance, my family frequently takes concept from the parents and kids we see in our favourite own family drama, “The Cosby display.” We aren't constantly capable of live as much as the beliefs the display provides to us, however they undoubtedly have an impact on the way we behave every day. we are grateful for the have an effect on it has on our lives.
In end, I think that television and films impact the manner almost all of us behaves in modern society. that is due to the fact some films reason us to act in adverse methods and because different suggests encourage us to emulate and include superb values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, i think, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79056447769 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4740157089 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4285714286 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899444760869 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0235293431712 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265739791281 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058000435244 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287860639087 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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