Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
It is given in the statement that "teachers salaries should be based on their student's academic performnace". I think the statement itself is a blunder because it failed to mention on what criteria the performance of the student should be measured. A teacher always tries to give the best to his/her students, it is the students who should exploit the knowledge of the teacher in a good way. For doing so the students should've the alacrity to learn. A student with passion to learn won't really need a teacher.
The performance metric is what difficult to have when the students are from different colleges and from different curriculums. Students knowledge varies widely like one student may be extremely good in Mathematics and may be poor in Science while there may be other students who work vice-versa. In this case we should never think of a question "Whom should be paid more ? Whether the Maths teacher or The Science teacher ? " cause both had put in their effort to enlighten the students. It's the difference between the students knowledge that craeted difference in their grades.
To support this let's take an example of Government Schools in India. People usually don't prefer Government schools in India. It's because of lack of proper facilities and quality of studies. So let's think of it, despite conducting highly competetive exams and lots of filtering to recruit for a post of governent teacher why public scholls still lacks in quality of eduaction ? The main reasons are high competetion from corporate schools which attracted people . Only people who can't afford to join their children in corporate schools use public schools and most of those people are working labour who don't have any educational background. Children in those schools are never willing to study beacuse of either lack of interest or lack of proper awarenss about importance of eduaction. In such case a teacher cannot do anything to make the children improve their grades . All the knowledge of such teacher would be just of no use.
Meanwhile in corporate schools as the schools don't really care for the fortune of the faculty. There are happening these sort of scenarios like firing the teachers, demoting them if the students fail to perform . All they want is to get good grades even though the students are dumb. So they put on a pressure on the teacher and eventually the teacher put on pressure on students. These kind of "run behind grades" policies are not good for either teachers or students. So, government should look into this and implement certain laws to provide job security to the teachers in the private sector schools.
An academic batch with brighter students can perform better than previous batches. However the salaries of the teachers should be based on their range of knowledge on subject which would be tested during hiring process but not the academic performance of students which doesn't have any significant metric to measure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, while, i think, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2486.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 492.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05284552846 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68996571535 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493902439024 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4396886667 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7857142857 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221781562296 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596444988656 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603433556994 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147971332284 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782453834313 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.