Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to the future generations.
Technology has made the lives of people a lot easier and a lot unhealthier. People used to live happier lives in the past without causing much damage to nature. I personally believe that the way my parents used to live was the most satisfying lifestyle although they don't have comforts and luxuries like today. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the lifestyle of people in the past requires minimum usage of natural resources. This ensures the availability of resources to future generations as well. People of my generation means people today, are irresponsible of how their way of modern living is causing degradation of the environment in many ways. For example, everyone now has a cell phone in their hands even if it is necessary or not. The increase in the use of cell phones and the signals emitted by them have caused the extinction of many species of birds. Also, usage of motor vehicles is on high these days and it is leading to some irreversible effects on air. If this continues, future generations are really at high risk.
Secondly, children usually learn things from their parents. There's a study that shows children are more likely to imitate their parent's actions in life. This shows it is how important to conduct our behaviour and lifestyle, otherwise generations will be affected by it. If we continue the same lazy and tech-dependent lifestyle like today, the next generations will also do the same and this will definitely impact their mental health and physical health as well. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. One of my friends used to play video games all the time and rarely used to come out of it. Ultimately, he happened to diagnose with a brain tumour. That's why it is really an alarming situation.
Finally, Socialisation is what makes people relax from the stress of day to day works. Sadly, people nowadays have no time for it, unlike people in the past who used to give higher importance to socialisation and sharing things with others. I can certainly say people have become selfish these days and this makes them alone. This isn't really a good virtue to be passed on to our future generations. For instance, many people don't even know the names of their neighbours. They just don't make an effort to know so. It is very discouraging behaviour of this generation and needs to be changed.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the lifestyle of my parent's generation is a lot better and satisfying to future generations. This is because they know the value of natural resources, they lead a healthy lifestyle in all aspects, and they give importance to people and relations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78540772532 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70628340441 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50643776824 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3616324808 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6428571429 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0658654014657 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180427140298 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318776153524 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459331267512 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291737214799 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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