Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Museums are places which are fascinating to many people. They have things that surprise people who come to see them. Different countries have different cultures and thus visiting a museum in one country is entirely different from visiting a museum in another country. I personally believe, when we visit a museum we get a chance to look into the past as well as some wonders in the world. That experience itself matters so much. I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
First of all, the Museums preserve things that are very exciting to see. Those kinds of things can never be found outside a museum. Such aspect of museums attracts a lot the people’s attention. Visitors will be gone through a lot of amazing stuff that makes them drop their jaw. For example, a Salarjan Museum in Hyderabad preserves the age-old warfare techniques that are very interesting to know about and rare to find them outside the museum. This uniqueness is the major attribute of the museums that pulls people into it.
Secondly, Museums are one of the cheapest forms of entertainment. A lot of people can afford to go to a museum. So it attracts all classes of people like movie theatres. As in the world, most of the people are middle-class people, and when prices are very favourable to such classes, it will help to get people into it. Museums have really mastered this technique and kept their prices affordable. My personal life experience is an example of this. I was from a middle-class family and during my childhood, my parents used to prefer a visit to a museum rather than going on an expensive holiday trip. I’m sure every average Indian parent would have the same kind of mentality as my parents.
Finally, Museums are for people of all ages. People can go to a museum right from their young age and even in their old age. Schools usually take children to museums tours. Museums possess things that are interesting to everyone. So this lack of age limit has helped museums to get more flow of people. For instance, consider the case of movies, they are usually rated before actually getting released into people. So, according to the movie censor certificate, only a particular age group of people will be allowed to watch that movie. This restricts some age groups. But, there are no such barriers when it comes to museums.
In conclusion, I’m of the opinion that museums are a place to recreate oneself regardless of the age or financial status of a person. That is why, many people visit a museum to get to know about the cultural and historical values of the place they visit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71179039301 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50848942833 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508733624454 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3690707748 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6129032258 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7741935484 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64516129032 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349695439306 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941930125943 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712987450528 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22764245384 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060619545418 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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