Many people visit museums when they travel to new places Why do you think people visit museums Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Museum is a place where famous artifacts and historical objects related to culture or scientific significance are preserved. Many tourists prefer to go to museums to understand the new place. There are few more reasons which help to understand why many people visit museums.

First, there are different types of museums such as general natural history and natural science, science and technology, history and art and museums tell the whole story of the place. Museum has a beautiful story of the city which makes it more appealing. When we visit any place we see the present but museums tell us the past and alteration of that particular city. For example the forts are now empty and there is no one but the museum giving ideas about the glory of the fort in the past.

Second, many people are interested in the nature and geographical importance of the place so they are eager to visit museums. For example I am fond of natural funa so whenever I visit a new place I find a botanical garden to learn about plants. Similarly, some people are interested in climate, vegetation, nature, flora, funa and geographical features so they visit museums to gain knowledge about changes that have come from past years.

Third, the tourists are very much interested in photography and purchasing the local ancient jewelry or any memories. Many people make their travel diary so for sure they find places which give information about history. The museums reflect ancient culture, festivals, stories of bravery, costumes and more which allure people. There are some places where people saved their ancient culture through art galleries and museums which attracts tourists most such as the Louver Museum, the British Museum London, the Vatican museums and many more.

Finally, on the basis of the above reasons we can say that museums are one of the most appealing tourist appealing places. There are so many more reasons to rest which also give answers why people visit museums.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, similarly, so, third, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99393939394 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44516726937 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50303030303 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.846846191 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402234200717 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14103947981 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758981719064 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240983371476 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370701846252 0.0645574589148 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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