Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In India older people said that the child is like a raw clay and how the society shape the clay it will mold into that kind of pot. As well as in the early age of development the child can mold according to their talent. There are two important factors of the development on is hereditary and another is the environment. The hereditary factor makes the child's basic personality factors like appearance and few habits since the society or environmental factor shape basic behavior according to society demands and pressure. So, I agree with the statement that the society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at early age to develop their talents. There are different examples with support my position and provide evidences related to statement.
Additionally, we have so many famous personalities whose talents nurtured by society and now they are great animates of their field. The famous Indian singer Lata Mangeshkar sang from her childhood and from very early age she engaged with organizations related to singing. She got support from society and preserved her unique voice and graced us with such beautiful songs. Sachin Tendulkar was famous cricketer of Indian team and in early age he stopped his studies and concentrated on cricket. Surroundings helped him to enhance his talent and he became one of the greatest cricketers of Indian cricket team. In India only, we have lots of examples which justifies the statement and if we talk about world then the statement become prove easily.
moreover, today different organizations work only to garnish the qualities of talented children. Our society itself understand the need of talent in any country and automatically all of us doing good to save talent. In India there are different cultures, and each has its own uniqueness so people trying to save such beautiful heritage through talented children. There are so many reality shows motivate the children to work hard as well as enhance their skills. That's why we get amazed when saw such reality program of little children and think how they can be such talented.
Furthermore, When I retrospect my life, I found I was good in drawing and singing but the society didn't give me opportunities to come forward with he talent. Slowly I grown up with studies and my talent suppress under studies competition. Now I don't want that the children's talent wastes as I had experienced so I started an organization for children to find their talent and enhance it. So, the society play vital role in development of the talent. It can make super talented hero to save society as well as it can also make terrorist to destroy the society. Experiences which society give turn the life of an individual.
Finally, the society must play a positive role in building the talent of their members. There should be helping hands for children to move ahead and flourish the talent not the hands to put backward the talent. In small age to make changes is easier than in later age. So, Society should identify especially talented children and provide training in early age to develop their talents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 528.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64323382094 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498106060606 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0013509305 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03703703704 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322034226937 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948366534819 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115905946396 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186660810974 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080774910654 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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