Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
there exists a popular maxim that states, success is one percent genius and ninety nine percent hard work. Here, the issue is arguing about a part of the pithy saying which claims that society should identify those children with intrinsic talents and nurture them accordingly to make space for flourishing the youngster. while some may demur to this point, a closer examination reveals that the issue should be supported for several reasons.
First of all, society sedulously confront itself to the fact, if it does not let the genuine prodigies come out of their provincial spot, the society will have to do things with the ramifications. Thereby, for the own growth of themselves, society should be ponderous about proper identification of these young wonders. Lionel messi is one of the best illustrations of the consequences of findings by the authority. Had he not been found on the streets of Argentina, the world would not spectacle one of the greatest footballing genius of all time. Heretofore, as a result, messi is still enchanting the worldwide viewers of the game with his dancing feet. Therefore, it can be concluded the, society must sanction on discovering the new talents.
Secondly, society's responsibility does not come to an end with the discovery of these talents. Besides, it should provide all the ample opportunities to them for enhancing their abilities, because most of the children do not have access to modern amenities at hand. For example, Indian cricket team, for many years, have been organizing talent hunts, arranging state cricket association where the seemingly talented boys and girls can practice and master the art of cricket. However, the process may seem very tedious and time-consuming, by today, the investments has come in handy. there is a surge of matured, precocious cricketers at such a tender age in the team. Perseverance and patience alway pay off, aren't they?
Although there are many dissents trying to refute these reasons by the fact that if we only focus on detecting the special talents while ignoring the general ones, will the society will have the highest outcome of their investment? I will not deny this point at all. In fact, society as a whole, should be concerned about both of the classes of children. Perhaps, I will not overemphasize the duty of society to push those talents again and again to get the best out of them. Otherwise, it will feel onerous upon them.
In summary, while there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clearer that there are greater advantages in finding and nurturing the young talents as they will reap out the most benefits for the society, if anything, for the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in fact, in summary, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02678571429 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71046120948 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3739446738 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.238095238 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248376957354 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638431591465 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572732527021 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127486988866 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422606586545 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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