Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I spent my childhood in a small town and currently I am living in a big city. I have both exposure and for me comparison is not so tough. I would prefer to live in a big city rather than a small town because of so many reasons. There are three major reasons behind my choice as follows.
First, big cities have a number of resources which makes life a better place to live, whereas in small towns we have to put more effort to live. I prefer big cities because today life is so fast and to achieve something I can not spend time on arrangement of basic resources to live. For example, I moved from a small town to a big city because the colleges do not have psychology subjects. For starting years and travelled forty miles daily for higher studies further then I shifted to a big city to save my time.
Second, metropolises are crowded and full of energy whereas small towns are calm and slow. It is true sometimes it is difficult to live in a crowded city but at the same time it is also difficult to live in a small city in this age of technology. For the young generation the zeal of metropolis attracts and charges them to work hard to do something innovative. One of my friends was an engineer and came to New York with me but gradually he found he is good at cooking so he started his own restaurant and earned well.
Third, education is most important and large developed cities have inventive educational institutes which help to carve talent of an individual. It is true small towns are less populated and less polluted in comparison to enormous cities but today education and career is more important then place. In particular, most famous and successful people live in big cities and among them so many migrate from small towns.
Finally, these are only three examples which support my position from so many others. People migrate from places with need and we have traces of migration from forest to big cities. Big cities have more potential which attracts people more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, then, third, well, whereas, for example, in particular, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52631578947 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47431848755 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501385041551 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5675107474 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328487950639 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109319578453 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981815916312 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190742825986 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760803650214 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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