Some people prefer to live in a small town Others prefer to live in a big city Which place would you prefer to live in Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Some people prefer living in small centers because they believe that it is peaceful and a quiet place to live without any roudiness . However, others think otherwise. They state that living in big centers one will have a better life with more opportunities. In my opinion, I would choose to live in big cities than small ones by the reasons discuss in this article.
First of all, there are many study opportunities in big centers than small ones, not to mention the number of courses that a big university in big centers offers. For example, I remember when I was living in a small town and it was the university time. Unfortunately, I had to move to the big city because my town did not offer me any university or college. Thus, this example illustrates the desideratum of living in a big city.
Moreover, there will be more job opportunities. We will certainly find more jobs in big cities than in small ones. As one example, when my friends and I graduated from university, we did not have much choice to go for. We were burdened to look for a job in a big center border with our city and we had to commute everyday. Then, this another example elucidates the necessity of a big center.
Furthermore, facilities are primordial for a city. Big centers need to pursue supermarkets and other sort of entertainment. For instance, in the past my town did not have cinemas but my friends and I love watching movies. Therefore, my parents had to take us to a city nearby for our entertainment. This instance shows that it is always better living in a big city than small villages.
Finally, I strongly believe that living in big cities is much better than small towns because they propose a better living way as having universities, more job opportunities and a variety of different entertainment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, of course, sort of, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66876971609 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84074899132 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479495268139 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1065098537 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8947368421 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28934381483 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943273714643 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089953484566 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184620708233 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107894914204 0.0645574589148 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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