Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the nomadic period humans have kept improving lifestyle. In today’s life is far more comfortable and better than olden days. Definitely today’s young people have a better life than their parents enjoyed when they were young. My opinion is based on three arguments.
Firstly, the medical facilities have become more advanced than they were in my parents' young age. The advancement of medical services makes our life span longer and healthier. For example, when my parents were young most of the illness was treated at home with homemade remedies and for acute diseases people relayed on amulets and worships. Nowadays we have mental health services also which helps to handle stress and anxiety but in my parents time there were no such facilities. So, today young people live freely and enjoy life without fear.
Secondly, my parents used to play indoor or outdoor games in their free time or they helped their parents in work. We have these options with lots of different things for entertainment and learning also. The internet completely changed our lives. We enjoy movies, television series, games, books, chatting, social media websites and much more because of the internet. The internet plays one of the major reasons for more happiness in today's young people. For example, because of the internet we have much easier to stay at home in time of quarantine due to covid19. Whereas my parents told me during emergency orders in the city at their time they became at home for 5 days without any work.
Thirdly, apart from health and entertainment there are more factors which supports that today’s youth is more enjoying than their parents did when they were young. The freedom for education, speaking of thoughts in front of family as well as to nation, friendship, parties and choose dreams for future. For example, when my mother was young she did not have freedom to study because she was a girl. We live in India and at that time parents do not let their girl child study. So my mother studied books by hiding herself under the bed. Today I have freedom to not only study but also have opportunities to fulfill my dreams.
Finally, in my country I had seen today’s young people really enjoy more than their parents did. The aforementioned arguments strengthen my position also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, whereas, apart from, as to, for example, speaking of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94344473008 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40516150083 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529562982005 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2995130756 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.125 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2083333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411094989233 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123941587762 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124149407361 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275728934668 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811278867751 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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