In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to an old saying, 'for an art to be truly adored, it should be understandable and lucid', similar is authors saying in the given statement. An artist expresses his emotions and thoughts through his creation. It can be in any from like, music, drawing, craft, poem, novel, etc. Sometimes the authors or composers make it easy to be found out, while sometimes the ideas are just too complex or abstruse to simply express, leaving the work needing some kinds of intelligence and having to be explained. After all, the real merit depends on the idea it conveys.
Moreover, to work on a film, a novel, a poem or any other form of art is a great challenge within itself. When we express our thoughts than listeners or readers understood on their cognitive process. Sometimes thoughts are such complex which is difficult to express without any other interpretation and only an artist can do it well. To understand the art is not easy for everyone because it depends on intellectual level but everyone get their own meaning from it. For example, today's abstract painting style is very famous but each like it is not possible because it is an abstract idea. It does not mean that it has less merits.
Furthermore, If we saw occupation of an artist he or she must work on some common ideas to sell their art. They make small understandable art pieces which people can understand easily and buy from stores. It does not indicate that only understandable form of art has worth. The intellectual people demand unique artistic work and they appreciate artists for it. For example, in India Bollywood music is very famous because it is easily understandable in comparison of classical music despite of, classical music is as much meritorious as other form of arts. People like to listen gazals and Sufi music also which is very difficult to interpret.
Finally, painting, novels, poetry, and other form of art is a medium to communicate feelings and thoughts. People use artists composition to express emotions to each other especially when they have difficulty to say directly. When it comes to emotions people have less difficulty to understand the art form. Gazals are toughest form poetry and people use it to express their feelings and they found it simple. There are the different type of people in every society and each person appreciate different form of art on the basis of their intellectual level as well as on their interest.
To sum up, the authors assertion seems to be correct it we saw market perspective whereas it is not important the understandable art forms have merit. There are people who simplify Geeta and Mahabharata Shlokas to make them easy which clearly indicate that complex art forms are also eminence among society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any form'?
Suggestion: in any form
...houghts through his creation. It can be in any from like, music, drawing, craft, poem, nove...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun merits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ract idea. It does not mean that it has less merits. Furthermore, If we saw occu...
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Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the toughest'.
Suggestion: are the toughest
...ulty to understand the art form. Gazals are toughest form poetry and people use it to expres...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...as on their interest. To sum up, the authors assertion seems to be correct it we saw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, after all, as to, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 467.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89507494647 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72350105751 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471092077088 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5645872687 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4583333333 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194378972694 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585732071552 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415954162168 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11784842245 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394384305851 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.