Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Enjoying live performances and watching the same on the internet or television are totally different experiences. Doing something with more than two sense organs is memorable and it happens in live performances so I agree with the statement that attending a live performance is more enjoyable. There are several more reasons behind my view which strengthen my opinion.
First, there are lots of people in a concert and everyone cheers with a loud voice which fills the ambiance with energy. The energy automatically increases the enjoyment in comparison to watching it alone at home. For instance, when we watch musical nights in any club is more appealing because we can roister with friends but at home we can not have the same fun as we have in live performances.
Second, the live performances are non edited and we can see the show as it is but the internet and TV programs are edited. To maintain the flow of the show and to make it short usually editors cut some less entertaining scenes according to them. The beauty and art can only be seen in spontaneous reactions of artists in live performances. For example, the stage artist has to perform on the basis of audiences’ reaction and sometimes they have to take a long pause to welcome public applause.
Third, other than live performances there are various interesting things usually present there which we can enjoy with the actual event. For example, I had attended a play on mental health and there were different stalls present outside the theater. In those stalls graduate students were doing mental health activities for the people and that was really amazing. In contrast, there is nothing to enjoy other than programs on television or the internet.
Finally, on the basis of above mentioned examples and reasons we can conclude that watching a live performance mesmerizes us more than watching it on television or internet. Such as watching live football matches is completely more satisfying than watching it on television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, then, third, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00898203593 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79032439252 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520958083832 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1966006552 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345496426223 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106225927005 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778237856339 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18972367696 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963883640502 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.