Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Attending a live performance for example a play concert or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Observing live event is a different impact than watching same broadcasting event at home. Liking and disliking vary from person to person. Few people enjoy live events o few people enjoy same broadcasting event by sitting at home. Personally, I believe Instead of attending a live performance better to watch same event on television. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explain in following essay.

First of all, watching a live performance is more enjoyable and is a different impact. Attending a live event gives you different feeling like audience shouts, clap, dance to warm the pleasant environment. At the end of the event, we can meet our favorite persona and we can click the picture with them.

Secondly, watching the same live performance on television saves your money as well as time. Attending live performance is expensive for enjoyment and you need to sit for whole event. While watching event on television is relax and time saving. We can watch same event any time with our time convenience with our friends, family and eat food together. Live shows are the source of socialization, we can meet our friends and we can make new friends. We may save our sweet memories with people around us by taking video shots.

On the other hand, to join real-time shows are expenses. You need to spend reasonable amount of money on this.

In conclusion, we should join live programs to make our self-more happy but not at the cost of duty and disturbance in daily routine. Before making any decision of these programs one should consider that expense of tickets should not disturb our family budget.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
.... While watching event on television is relax and time saving. We can watch same even...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... duty and disturbance in daily routine. Before making any decision of these programs o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90252707581 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63391482987 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5118173597 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4444444444 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30337261462 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108052792829 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891608368974 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153842539984 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098095824724 0.0645574589148 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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