Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city versus living in a small town. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, many people prefer to live in large cities because of the comfortable lifestyle and availability of all the life needs. There are advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, Living in a large city gives you all the facilities. Main advantage of living in a large city is availability of public transport, education system, health care centers ( hospitals),big food centers, cinema halls, malls. Due to good transportation people can easily connect to other people. In small towns, people are facing transportation issues. Due to lack of transportation people cannot educate their children's and during medical emergencies people can’t reach the hospitals on time. For example, When I was 10 years old i went to my grandmother’s hometown Ratnagiri (it is a small town). My grandmother was not well and we needed to take her to hospital at midnight but due to lack of transportation we were unable to take her to hospital on time. In large cities we are not facing such problems.
Secondly, Although public transportations are good and diverse, it lead to high pollution as well. Dust and smog make unhealthy and illness to people. Respiratory diseases, caused from pollutants in the atmosphere, are the inevitable diseases for the urban population. In small cities people are healthy and they are not suffering from such respiratory diseases. For instance, Delhi which is capital of India, On 25 November 2019, the Supreme Court of India made statements on the pollution in Delhi saying "Delhi has become worse than narak (hell)" and due to pollution many people suffered from respiratory diseases. Even In large cities many restaurants are opened and most of the people are preferring junk food but junk foods are not good for health and teenagers are suffering from stomach pain due to junk food. In a small town, cost of living is less as compared to large cities.
In conclusion, living in a large city is comfortable as well as enjoyable, but living in a small town is more healthy. Living in a large city has some advantages as well as disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99180327869 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96813000959 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505464480874 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3889694699 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.35 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245749760602 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10235344875 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118735810999 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203718963187 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108630706856 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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