Many people visit museums when they travel to new place. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People take actions because of diverse reasons and, sometimes, it may be difficult to rationalize the reason/s why an individual has taken a particular action. However, I think the reason why a lot of people who visit a place, for the first time, attend the museums in such places is due to the following.
Firstly, people have different tastes in all facets of life. What a man wants want to see is what another man doesn’t want to catch a glimpse of. However, there are some traits that connect all humans: the desire to come in close contact with extraordinary/rare objects is one of those traits. Museums are places where one can catch a glimpse at objects of diverse artistic and historical values. Some of these objects may not be present in any other part of the world. Therefore, people who travel to new places may find it very pleasing to go to the museum to see such unique objects.
Secondly, humans are gregarious animals and most people love making new friends particularly when they are in new environments. The museum serves as a good place to meet up with new people with similar tastes; most especially fellow travelers. These likelihood of hooking up with other people while concurrently enjoying the wide array of objects in display at museums, attracts travelers to the museum.
Lastly, as inquisitive beings, people may find it attractive to visit museums in order to learn more about the culture of the local population. Museums serve as fertile grounds to educate oneself about the history and culture of the people in a society while satisfying one’s curiosity. In conclusion, I believe people visit museums when they are in a new environment in order to meet new people, see unique objects and also educate themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this likelihood' or 'These likelihoods'?
Suggestion: This likelihood; These likelihoods
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88590604027 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69605760954 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7926958625 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367319514408 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125684497886 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913255601209 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228941755969 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652811886643 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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