The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper.
"Commuters complain that increased rush-hour traffic on Blue Highway between the suburbs and the city center has doubled their commuting time. The favored proposal of the motorists' lobby is to widen the highway, adding an additional lane of traffic. But last year's addition of a lane to the nearby Green Highway was followed by a worsening of traffic jams on it. A better alternative is to add a bicycle lane to Blue Highway. Many area residents are keen bicyclists. A bicycle lane would encourage them to use bicycles to commute, and so would reduce rush-hour traffic rather than fostering an increase."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument talks about how to cut the rush_hour traffic on the Blue Highway between the subrubs and the city.Here the arguments state that commuters complained about the rush traffic which doubled their commuting time. The assertion may be true but seems to be exaggregated.Because the commuters may trying to lobby the authority to get a new lane immediately to the highway.Getting a new lane to the existing roads is cumbersome task, the more the pressure on the authorities ,more the pace of constructing a new lane . So the commuters might just exaggerating their assertion which may not be true.They failed to provide the evidence to support their claim.
The sentence saying addition of new lane of traffic resulted in worsening the situation of the highways seems absolutely quixotic.As the could be used to divert half the traffic thus reducing the entire traffic congestion problems the mentioned argument in the passage has no meaning at all.While the new lane may attract more traffic to come to highways,the overall problem could be attenuated.
The argument suggests adding a bicycle lane as a solution to reduce the rush hour traffic.As it was mentioned that most residents are keenly bicyclists.Adding a bicycle lane would never reduce the intensity of the problem.Also the situation might become worsen as all the cyclists are given a limited ,one lane and result in much more congestion in the bicycle lane.
The addition of lanes to a road is substantial solution only when the different sort of vehicles that would go through that road are uniformly distributed.Otherwise it is not at all recommended.Consider a situation in which more than 50% traffic comes from bycyclists then a separate lane for bicyclists will confine the space available to the bicycles and eventually turns the situation worst.
The solution for this would be usage of public transport.A public transport usage comes with many add-ons.It reduces cost of travelling,traffic on roads,time to travel(when most use public transport) ,fuel consumption and what not.I would say a public transport is far better than individual vehicles.Motorcyclists in pursue of thrill and in chasing time would choose motor cycles which create problems.So, one should try to use public transport only as many times as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24661246612 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31107445172 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.018594608 60.3974514979 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 276.571428571 118.986275619 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.7142857143 23.4991977007 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141289671322 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876443381134 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108227219622 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726979867334 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813529613559 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 14.1392134831 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.1743820225 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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