A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

It is important that in a country every child who is going to school, are studying the same basic national curriculum. Having the same curriculum will help the children to study or learn the same things or study the same concepts which their contemporaries are learning.

It is necessary to maintain the same standard of the curriculum everywhere in each state and schools as this will help the children to be on the same page with one another. Everybody will have the opportunity to build the same education base regardless of their location in a country. Having gone through the same curriculum will also build the same preliminary education base in every child which might be helpful for their further studies after school.

Having learned the same curriculum, children will have the confidence in them to compete for any exams such as the national entrance exams like SAT and ACT, which are required to get cleared before one child gets into college after done with school. Children will also also be more comfortable to move from one part of the country to another if required for their studies as they will be updated nationally through the same curriculum.

Though having the same curriculum is necessary to maintain in a country, it is also important to make necessary modifications in the curriculum if necessary. For example, the nature of people varies in different parts of a country. A particular class or exam pattern might be good or work best who is studying in New York City but that particular pattern might not be suitable for a student living in the countryside of Mississippi. Teachers may need to come up with variations in the study/class technique which will help the student to learn the most of it.

So, it can be said that in a country, it is very important that all of the students are going through the same national curriculum until they enter college. But, at the same time, the technique of the classes/assessments might need to differ according to the location of the schools and nature of the students.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 265, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: also
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Line 17, column 65, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...in a country, it is very important that all of the students are going through the same nat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89428571429 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75897200613 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442857142857 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1892047102 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.769230769 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32195411118 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129239133711 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108925858299 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206873193314 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812382200998 0.0667264976115 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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