A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Teaching same materials to all students of a nation until entrance to college might be accurate in some prospects but it might no be suitable for all societies existing in a nation. This is obvious that some knowledge should be learned by all students to know about their nation. But there might be some variance according to culture,ethnicity,language,religion and so more.
In a nation, there might be of different linguistic peoples. So teaching the same language skill or knowledge will be detrimental to the existence of other languages.If only one literature materials are taught in class that will hamper the other literature in this nation.
Variance in religions is common to most of the nations and so it is not advisable to educate them the similar religious stories . This might cause to increase resentment in the different religious societies.Some nations include minor societies which are needed special care to protect their extinction.
Different regions have some difference in their moral characteristics inside a national border. So it will be better to nurture them according to their social characteristics.Some basic knowledge are essential for a student throughout his life.For example, a student of science background should posses some knowledge about arts,commerce,history etc to be a complete human.In this regards basic knowledge of fundamental topics should be learned by all the students.
History of a nation should be taught to all students. It is required to inform all of its peoples about the nation's success and pride that will make them dedicated to the nation's betterment.
Every people of a nation should gather some basic knowledge about their nation. Some fundamental knowledge are essential for every person to be a complete learner but teaching same materials to all students until entrance to college is not advisable in some circumstances.There must some differences in curriculum which are unavoidable but rest of the syllabus should be identical .
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...tal to the existence of other languages.If only one literature materials are taugh...
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...erce,history etc to be a complete human.In this regards basic knowledge of fundame...
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...rest of the syllabus should be identical .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44089456869 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58595845062 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450479233227 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.2386168631 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188889054103 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907732792943 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485233055108 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121628551373 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463371040877 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.