Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Science and technology will help to solve most of the problems in future but alone it is not possible to solve all the problem's of a society. Applications of technology provides solution to many problems in present century so one might think that further development of science will solve all the problems of our society.
Some crimes like road accident, theft, security issues might be fully solved using technological development. But it is not feasible to solve all human problems. Because some problems are based on human's psychological imbalances that will be impossible to tackle for science and technology.
Let's consider an example where a student is morally inaccurate. Society needs to teach him desired moral values . It is fully impossible for sciences to obtain desired change on that child. Human assistance is needed to correct the child. Technology alone can't handle this type issues but it cal help to alleviate this problem.
Science and technology not only solve problems but also creates problems. For example digital security is widely popularized. Digital communication , storage of highly confidential resources are common in present day. Though these are easy compared to traditional system but these have hampered by hacking sometimes. Hacking is a problem that has been arose from technological development. So it science and technology that creates problems of society also.
Health sector uses science and technology extensively to solve different health problems. On the contrary extensive uses of technology creates health problems also. So it is not feasible to think of a society where all problems will be solved by technology alone.
In conclusion it is obvious that science and technolgy can't eliminte all problems of our society. Though the further development of technology will be able to solve many of our problems, solution to all problems will be imaginary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...tackle for science and technology. Lets consider an example where a student is ...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... needs to teach him desired moral values . It is fully impossible for sciences to ...
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Line 9, column 257, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... to correct the child. Technology alone cant handle this type issues but it cal help...
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Line 9, column 297, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (cal) must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...cant handle this type issues but it cal help to alleviate this problem. Science...
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Line 13, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...idely popularized. Digital communication , storage of highly confidential resource...
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Line 13, column 353, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'arisen'.
Suggestion: arisen
...mes. Hacking is a problem that has been arose from technological development. So it s...
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Line 13, column 453, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...nology that creates problems of society also. Health sector uses science and te...
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Line 17, column 160, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s of technology creates health problems also. So it is not feasible to think of a so...
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Line 21, column 56, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t is obvious that science and technolgy cant eliminte all problems of our society. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40666666667 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88162430013 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1657009397 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2380952381 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95238095238 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231341435859 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801983773591 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686223728361 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143611754756 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541858324704 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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