Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
The development of economic sectors become one of the most significant causes of ruining nature, reducing the forests, endangering the life of wildlife. Any abnormality in nature makes the failure of a usual ecosystem. The prompt stated that preserving the wilderness areas in their natural state is more important than economic development, even though laws should be made for protecting these areas. I strongly agree with the suggestion as it is so important to keep the wilderness areas pristine for our environment and the life of wild animals and protect the earth.
First of all, the reduction of wilderness areas is hampering the environment, already can feel the effects of global warming. Raise of industries, residential areas, business centers replacing the natural state with an artificial state. While nature is protecting our environment, these activities are doing vice versa. Trees can absorb CO2 and create oxygen which, to prevent global warming CO2 amount needs to diminish and to breathe living beings need oxygen. So, to keep the environment well, it is significant to keep the wilderness areas in their natural state.
Secondly, the ecosystem of an area will be flawed if the habitat of animals is destroyed, which will create a negative impact on the environment. Every animal, humans are dependent on other animals or plants for the consumption of food, if wilder areas are reduced, there would be a scarcity of food and other essential elements which we take from nature.
Though one might say that economic gain is important for the nation's development, having great wealth without good health isn't more important. Industries are continuously polluting the water, the air, people are suffering because of the pollution, can't taking breathe pleasantly. So, there should be rules for preventing the remaining wilderness areas.
According to the above circumstances, it is clear that wilder areas are much important than economic gain, the government should pass laws to preserve wilderness areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...center replacing the natural state into a artificial state. While nature is prote...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ural state. Sencodly, the ecosystem of a area will be flawed if the habitant of ...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ng a great wealth without a good health isnt more important. So, there should be rul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41071428571 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01373344636 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0998753115 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499703359009 0.243740707755 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151155044139 0.0831039109588 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118371951317 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227120123907 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084706981743 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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