Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
There has been an imbalance in the state of equilibrium of the ecosystem, as a result of improper management and conservation of its natural resources. Conservation has played an important role in preserving natural resources and ensuring that it does not lose its original nature. If laws are being made to preserve the remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, what impact does it have on the economy's gain? There is need for the ecosystem which comprises of living organisms interacting with their physical environment to maintain a state of stable equilibrium.
The era of Industrialization has made species to go into extinction thereby causing them to become endangered. Human activities such as deforestation, agricultural practices like irrigation, and illegal hunting and kill of wildlife has been a contributing factor to the extinction of these species, so it is important for government agencies to pass laws in order to regulate and establish a well-managed conservation center.
In Nigeria, there are conservation centers aimed at protecting the interest of endangered wildlife. Such conservation centers include Yankari reserve park in Bauchi states, Okomu reserve at Edo state, Old Oyo reserve in Oyo state, Akure forest reserve, Lekki Conservation center and several others.
Every country has laws that regulates and guides the people living in it, hence it is an ideal plan for government agencies to formulate laws governing the protection of wildlife. Such laws should prevent deforestation of trees, illegal hunting and killing of animals, and recycling of natural resources that would be beneficial to the economic growth.
However, the preservation of wildlife in their various habitats has therefore established a stable ecosystem equilibrium thus helping the economic to gain in areas through the preservation of biodiversity and its natural resources, maintaining ecosystem balance, provision of long-term benefits and in scientific research.
Many people do not realize the effects of lack of conservation as it has really tampered with the ecosystem leading to extinction of valuable species and depletion of the ecosystem. An example of ecosystem depletion is the ozone layer depletion caused by burning of fossil fuels and hydrocarbon substances which releases CFC( Chlorofluoro carbon) into the atmosphere resulting to global warming and also the cutting down of trees can cause the species present in its natural habitat to be displaced leading to their extinction. Therefore, people should be enlightened on the importance of in-situ and ex-situ conservation which is an essential aspect of conserving wild-life in their various habitats.
Establishing a conservation center is one thing but when laws are not passed on the system, such system cannot work. The need to formulate laws are essential to the economy as it would serve as a solid ground in generating revenue for the government and also can be used as source of tourism for expatriates to carry out their various research.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...? There is need for the ecosystem which comprises of living organisms interacting with their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2568.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46382978723 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09938003994 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514893617021 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 823.5 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1565067948 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.5 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262383121659 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877755655908 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952810955169 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123986649873 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756233432173 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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