Wilderness areas reasouce is various and precious sometimes. The statement argued that every wild area should be prevented from developing. As far as I concern, It is hasty to make such conclusion. Wild areas, where also the place lack of population, could be some poor place need support. If this limitation implemented, it would make the region where the area located lose the opportunity to develop in the future.So we should discuss this topic in part.
Firstly, wild areas often located where people seldom go to. So if there is no people, we should make a observation to find out the condition of the area. If there is the place where animals living on the edge of extinction, we should protect this area from any development. As they are victims of human actions.If there is a mine underground, the government should make survey to decide whether we should mine it. If we should, then the government should take measruse to exploit it in progress.
Secondly, there maybe poor people living in the wild area, we need to help them. In China, there is a huge contast between the east area where condensed with metropolises and west , especially in villages, where you can sleep under moon and stars. What's more, because of the rare traffic and communication, people living there seldom went out. In this wil area, the government should make more action to help people to develop economy. Then the area will prosper in the future like chinese mid-area, which was poor, too. So it wouldn't to be hasty if the Government to make survey of the wild area to make choice whether to protect or develop it.
Thirdly, it would be a better choice to make decision for the future. There some wilderness area like desert. Living species hardly live there. Maybe someone do not take it fof granted. While I think in the future human-being would take measures to entrude the desert as we can make more discovery. While the limitation of the present science circumscribe our ablity, so we can wait for the progress of science then we will develop the desert.
In conclusion, it is hasty to forbid any development in any wild area, we should make research then make decision.
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...protect this area from any development. As they are victims of human actions.If th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81333333333 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56509718608 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485333333333 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2195753118 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4782608696 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3043478261 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52173913043 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188428988271 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651135847616 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414657078203 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124252636361 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194757043604 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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